Movie Review(The Wizard of OZ)

   The movie Wizard of OZ is about Dorothy, Toto, Tinman, Lion, and Scarecrow going on a journey to find the wizard of OZ and all of them getting what they want to have: a brain for Scarecrow, a heart for Tinman, courage for Lion, and home for Dorothy and Toto.

   I hated this movie, because of the three reasons. The first reason is that the characters like Lion and the people who live in Munchkin Land did not look real. They just looked like men wearing costumes. Also, their voices were very annoying too. The second reason is that the graphics were awful. The tornado, Dorothy's house and the Emerald City looked so fake. Everyone will know that those are Computer Graphics. The third reason is that there were no exciting or beautiful scenes. Lots of other movies have exciting or beautiful scenes; Even the old movies! However, in this movie there were no exciting or beautiful scenes so it was really boring.

   I think this movie needs to be remade with modern technology.

My 30 day goals

   I have three goals that I want to achieve during 30 days. First, I will not get yellow or red cards. Second I will not eat fast food for my health. Third I will wake up at 6: 30am everyday.

   First, I'll not get yellow or red cards. When we speak Korean or do bad things I'll have to get yellow or red cards so I'll not speak Korean and follow EOP and I'll not lie, fight or do other bad things that can make teachers give me yellow or red cards. I'll ask my room PA about my yellow or red cards once a week.

   Second, I'll not eat fast food for my health. Fast food is not good for our health so I'll have to refuse fast food when my friends or family ask me. Also, I'll have to find healthy foods that I can eat instead of fast food.

   Third, I'll wake up at 6: 30am everyday and study or do homework for 30 minutes before I go to the cafeteria to eat breakfast so I'll finish all my homeworks that I did not finish and get no yellow cards from teachers.

   I'll have to work hard to finish three goals in 30 days.

my introduction!!!

   Hello my name is Patrick and I will write about my introduction like where I live, who I am, what I like. I made this blog and introduction in a camp named GLPS.

 

   I'm a thirteen year old boy who lives in Bundang, Korea and in my family there are my Mom, Dad, younger brother and me. 

   I love to play sports like soccer, basketball, badminton and sometimes I play computer games when I'm bored. 

   My dream is to become a lawyer or a diplomat.

   My favorite number is 7 and America is my favorite country.

   My favorite foods are Italian and American.

   

   -THANK YOU VERY MUCH-