Thursday, August 8, 2013

My creative story!!!

Title: The new planet



In AD 2507 because human had polluted the Earth and destroyed it all of the human had to move to another planet very far away from Earth. The new planet also had a planet like sun, air and even water too. However, the one different thing was that the new planet was 5 times bigger than the Earth. For small human the new star was too big for them so the other part of the planet was not discovered yet. For 5 years no one was curious about the other part of the land. Then in AD 2512 countries started to send troops to discover the unknown land. However no answers and no survivors came back. Satellites also couldn't send any pictures of the unknown land. So the countries made the unknown land into a forbidden land and no one can go into the land.
Then one day a strongest country had secretly command a  genius scientist Norman to make 6 super soldiers who can run 3 times faster, longer and survive without food and water for 3 weeks. Finally the scientist mad 6 super soldiers in AD 2530 and because no one thought these super soldiers as a human they named them 1,2,3,4,5, and 6.
The country demand them to go into the forbidden land and they did. At the first day nothing happened. Then at the second, third, and fourth day also nothing happened so they finally chose to go back to their country. They walk for 10 hours but nothing came out. They realized that they are stuck in somewhere that no one can go out. First they were okay because they didn't need food or water but after 4 weeks they started to be crazy. They were all hungry but there were not enough food and water left for all of them. 

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Click here for Ending 2.

Click here for Ending 3.

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